Dead Roads Me speak pretty one day.
"While I'm sure this game came out much much better than my previous two (which were just awful), I hope people will enjoy playing it."
Contextually this sentence makes no sense, unless you're implying that you think you did a bad job when you say that you hope people enjoy it. The first part of the sentence includes the word 'while,' which means that the second half will have to contradict the first.
Otherwise, decent game.